http://starling-1.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] starling-1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] genlisae 2010-05-09 10:02 pm (UTC)

I love the way you are avoiding the obvious emotional and dramatic opportunities and going for something a little off kilter. You skirt it with Nate, and with Lilith. Scenes in a jail can go way wrong but you nailed it! Wonderful, absolutely wonderful writing!
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