I don't usually listen to soundtracks for stories, but I felt compelled to click play on the Youtube video. I seriously love that song, it's amazing and it really does suit your story.
So okay, I finally caught up with chapter 3. Again, I have to say that your writing is wonderful. The interactions with all your characters, the personalities themselves come off so natural. I love all the conflicts your characters have. Such as Ripp's issues not only about Telestro but with his family, and even the smaller ones such as how Tybalt is going to deal with his grandfather's ultimatum is intriguing. Dirk and Darren's story I love so much, you've handled Dirk perfectly. (I've always been a Cassandra Goth/Darren shipper so this is kind of interesting for me, I'm kinda all scowley about Haley but I'll see where you go with it). Not to mention the big mystery about those girls dying. EEps!
I ramble, but it's okay I haven't left a comment yet and I'm happy to have caught up. I'll wait until you update with a new chapter to gush about your writing again.
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So okay, I finally caught up with chapter 3. Again, I have to say that your writing is wonderful. The interactions with all your characters, the personalities themselves come off so natural. I love all the conflicts your characters have. Such as Ripp's issues not only about Telestro but with his family, and even the smaller ones such as how Tybalt is going to deal with his grandfather's ultimatum is intriguing. Dirk and Darren's story I love so much, you've handled Dirk perfectly. (I've always been a Cassandra Goth/Darren shipper so this is kind of interesting for me, I'm kinda all scowley about Haley but I'll see where you go with it). Not to mention the big mystery about those girls dying. EEps!
I ramble, but it's okay I haven't left a comment yet and I'm happy to have caught up. I'll wait until you update with a new chapter to gush about your writing again.