I love the way you are avoiding the obvious emotional and dramatic opportunities and going for something a little off kilter. You skirt it with Nate, and with Lilith. Scenes in a jail can go way wrong but you nailed it! Wonderful, absolutely wonderful writing!
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Date: 2010-05-09 10:02 pm (UTC)